Chapter 1 page 38

posted April 28th, 2019, 6:13 pm


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April 28th, 2019, 6:13 pm

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I finished a page... yay

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April 28th, 2019, 6:18 pm

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the fire bon again.

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April 28th, 2019, 7:13 pm

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April 28th, 2019, 6:27 pm

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Dude the shading is fantastic.

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April 28th, 2019, 7:14 pm

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@TerrytheTeryx: aaaaa thanks!

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April 28th, 2019, 6:31 pm

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MUST. HUG. CUTE. FENNEKIN.
That adorable face DEMANDS snuggles!

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April 28th, 2019, 7:14 pm

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@Spatan98: yes

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April 29th, 2019, 2:13 am

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@Sakarime: But let's not stop there!
ALL THESE CUTE MOTHERF****RS GET SNUGGLES!

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April 29th, 2019, 6:40 am

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@Spatan98: AAA

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April 28th, 2019, 6:50 pm

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Every single character in this entire comic is adorable and I don't think I'll be able to take it much longer.

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April 28th, 2019, 7:14 pm

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April 28th, 2019, 6:57 pm

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[kishi voice] heylilmamalemmewhisperinyaear-

it's lovely to see all these characters again! hopefully they'll all develop into a great supporting cast. so far just looking at them and their expressions/body language/dialogue etc. gives a clear first impression of who they are - airri is outgoing and friendly, rose (babey girl!!!!! babie!!!!!) is a quiet observer, and toby is stoic and hard to impress. it can be a challenge to communicate even basic information like about a character so quickly, so the fact that you've managed to set up all of their personalities so quickly is really good writing!

as always, the art is beautiful, and your shading ability never ceases to impress me. the only criticism i have is on kishi's face in the bottom left panel - her eyes, mouth, and dialogue are all communicating somewhat different emotions (eyes and speech both say nervous, but mouth says bedroom), which is a little confusing to look at. i know from experience that getting expressions down can be a bitch, but keep trying! it's just a matter of finding that balance.

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April 28th, 2019, 7:16 pm

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@Zosonils: aaaa thanks!!!

Also dhfjkagjkh, oh gawd no Kishi. But thanks! I'll take the info down!
edit: changed aaaaa

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April 29th, 2019, 1:48 am

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Must... remember... names.....

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April 29th, 2019, 6:40 am

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April 29th, 2019, 7:19 am

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Woah great work

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April 29th, 2019, 7:22 am

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I love how shy Kishi is seriously that make her even cuter

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April 29th, 2019, 7:45 am

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April 29th, 2019, 7:54 am

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And the 5th panel is just soo cute

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April 29th, 2019, 2:24 pm

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SO CUTE!!!

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April 30th, 2019, 7:38 am

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@Bolt1021: YEE

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April 29th, 2019, 11:16 pm

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Back from your little hiatus? That was fast :p good page and I agree that kishi's shyness makes her cuter ( wait is it weird to call a pokemkn that was human cute?)

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April 30th, 2019, 7:40 am

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@Julian or Yoshidakid: yee (I mean humans can be cute too *shrug*)

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April 30th, 2019, 5:23 pm

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*shrugs*

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